"Block and Bag", a poem by Tom Sleigh, highlighted this month on Robert Pinsky occasional poetry discussion forum, is an elegant and rowdy verse where animation is everything. The set up is a hotel guest freshly checked into his room, tired and perhaps bored with the traveling from city to city, seeing nothing but one bland motel after another in quick succession. His mind is racing with an urge to create something that is not pre-mixed, popped from a mold, or other wise leeched of all spontaneity . He stares out the window and sees the courtyard of a typical motel, a "blah arena." True to his function as a writer, he creates his own fun.
The writer's mind is a restless thing indeed, with its antennae always
positioned to scan and notice and interpret the other wise un-narrated
events of the world, the small happenstances that follow other related
incidents of otherwise no particular consequence to the quality of the
scribe’s day. I well imagine Sleigh and others like him staring out a
tourist grade window in a generic hotel staring at the fabricated
Americana in front of him, the comfortable swimming pool, the parking
spaces numbered and marked with oil stains, the sequentially planted
flora and shrubbery and the landscaping which is either obsessively
maintained like a forty dollar manicure, or showing lack of care around
the edges as brown spots on the lawn and dead leaves on the bushes
reveal the brutalities of weather and bad staffing.
The poet peers into
this bland arena and desires to make something happen, to find details
and commotions that stray from the scripted norm and which appear to
bringers of chaos, the usurpers of authority,the life force that cannot
be contained by check out times or planter boxes from Pottery Barn, So
there is a block and bag in a chase and a duel and a gavot and high step
that brush against the otherwise stationary world of a hotel public
area, a bit of unruly behavior that could not be predicted; the
narration begins, the struggles of being a alive come to mind and find
themselves diagnosed and outlined in Sleigh’s telling what he sees and
thinks.
It is a fresh examination of things that rarely get scrutiny
save for safety inspections and minor repairs; what I enjoy about this
poem is the conceit that there is a secret life to things that have no
nervous system, no brain, that do not breath nor procreate. It is a
cartoon rendering, coyote vs road runner to an extent.
Grey and grousing poetry readers, by whom I mean writers of poetry without book contracts or publications of note who happen to be in the early stages of seniordom, say, 60-63 years old, like to stick to a talking point that poetry is dead. We've all had this conversation to the point where we can mount the arguments on either side of the proposition, yay or nay. There is too much bad poetry out there the self-selected judges would say, there are too many writers who have gleaned the wrong lessons from poetic tradition and give us, the readers, eager of eye but shy of purse, a third or fourth rate renditions of ideas of past , more brilliant generations. Do you roll your eyes when these complaints meet your ears? Do you wish the live complainer in front of you were a web page you could close with a left or right click of the mouse? I wouldn't be surprised if you've had similar encounters and reactions and share a distrust , distaste for and have allergic reactions to blanket statements , regardless of subject, whether it be art, politics, food, or music, or the kind of person you are attracted to. The cure for the negativity, if there is any, is to push ahead and stay keen on the search for new poems, new movies, new books, indeed,new friends who can brighten your life and make you a smarter , better person by benefit of having conversations with them; that would be a stream that flows in two directions , and that is the miracle of that happenstance. Whitney Balliet, jazz critic for the New Yorker from 1951 until 2007 (a very long time to be the one commenting on what musicians are creating in the moment and never to be heard quite the same way again) collected a book of his essays called "The Sound of Surprise", a title that beautifully summarizes the art of jazz improvisations and which , at least for me, crystalizes a particular philosophy I am trying to cultivate as I edge into the aforementioned zone of elderhood, the capacity to be surprised.
Sunday, July 27, 2014
Now, it is fine to create entertainment, but the highest form of communication is undoubtedly that which can express the broadest concept (or the most concepts) as effectively as possible.The height of literature is, therefore, the same. This isn't meant to imply that entertainment is neither Art nor valuable, but that is inherently a weaker or more limited form of literature. Simply stated, merely entertaining people is not the end of literary aspiration by a long shot. I am trying to define and defend the most complete and efficient literature: that which can express the most most effectively or complexly. This means that there are, buried within the uncertainties, objective principles of literary art. Aesthetics, briefly, can, rather than an inquiry, be a artistic doctrine or principle. There were, in fact, several aesthetic movements. And finally, I should argue that hedonism is very much a part of the Western culture: that the freedom of doing one's own thing, or the illusion of it, is the general propensity of this society, yours and mine. It has been a long time since Emerson wrote of his ideal man, a man slave to his impulses, but that ideology has buried itself deeply in our culture. We think that we've woken up from the retrograde slumber, but we notice, in some sense of collective twitching, that our dreams are filled with the likes of us facing open windows overlooking drive in theatre movie screens that emit the sound of thunder and the rattle of buildings being battered by high winds, and yet no images appear on the flat surface of the white leviathans.
I worked in the carnival during the seventies, one of those guys in an
orange shirt in a line up game covered in checkered and striped tarp and
festooned with dusty stuffed animals who badgered you to play and win
your girl friend "the big one". What a tale that is. After work one
night in Costa Mesa, a bunch of us gathered at the "carnie entrance" to
drink beer, bullshit and do whatever drugs were on hand. I usually
played my harmonica, someone with a guitar would usually show up and a
jam would ensue, which the other carnies, the lumpiest of the lumpen,
enjoyed quite a bit.
One night, though, I was playing as usual, after work,
kicking a slew of Butterfield and John Sebastian riffs, when I saw this
large, beefy ride jock (the guys who operated the carnival rides) saying
something to me. I leaned closer and asked him to repeat, and he
repeated, but I still didn't understand him because I went back to
riffing on the harp. I leaned closer still, turning my good ear toward
him. He staggered a little , gave me a stare that would make fish float
to the top of the lake, and croaked "how'd you like that thing crammed
up your ass?" I set my beer down and pocketed the harmonica and then left
through the carnie gate back toward the motel room.
I am blues musician because
I am a professional grade blues harmonica player who plays mostly blues music. I am not a "bluesman", however. That term is covered in so much
mythology and wishful thinking that it has come to represent qualities and
essences that are intangible, inestimable, and vaguely metaphysical. That is to
say I think the term "bluesman" is a little pretentious when applied
to most good, honest musicians who specialize in blues styles. I am a blues
musician, verifiable in fact, not dependent on someone else's criteria.The definition of "professional" is
slippery, and perhaps I shouldn't have mentioned it.
That is why I qualified my
remark with the attending term "grade", meant only to say that I am
good enough to be paid for playing the harmonica if I wanted to go that route. Alas,
I do not have a recording contract, but the world is full of working harmonica
players as good as or better than I who are similarly unattached to a record
label. That fact does not diminish their professionalism, nor diminishes their
skills as harp players. I would say a professional grade blues harmonica player
is knows the changes, knows the key differentials, gets the tone and emphasis
right, and is able to fall back, accompany, or lay out altogether when he or
she is not taking a solo; this is to say the professional grade blues harmonica
player listens to what the others in the band are doing and adds to a quality
musical experience, not dominate it.
Mostly, though, the professional is paid,
and the amateur is not, strictly speaking.
Ido believe that one can learn the feeling and the craft of the blues and make legitimate, moving, innovative blues music mostly from listening to recordings and attempting to emulate what's being heard. Unlike a good many graduate students who attended college the same time I did, I believe in the metaphysics of presence, which means, simply, that great music, great art, great novels and the like embody the virtues and nuance of the artists who made them and that those qualities can be transmitted to others who are likewise interested in expressing their emotions and experience in ways more beautiful than snippy complaints. I can only speak of my own experience, of course, but once I heard Butterfield, my choice was made for a life time. What is essential for a blues harmonica player to get to the level of conveying great emotion through an original take on familiar blues structures is to play, play, play and play again; if the student is determined , the path will be cleared.
Change is the only possible constant in this universe, and
those things that humans create that have the capacity to change have the
capacity to survive, flourish to some extent, and remain expressively relevant
to modern experience. Blues, like any other art, cannot remain fixed, in
stasis.Those "traditional" forms of blues that well
meaning players attempt to preserve and often preach the absolute virtues of,
were themselves inventions who took their inspiration and building blocks from
older forms that preceded them. It's desirable to listen to, appreciate and
perform older blues styles as a means of staying clued to what an older
generation of musicians can tell us, but it's folly, I believe, for anyone to
insist that the best music peaked there and , in fact, stopped developing.There are only so many kinds of narratives we have in this
current life, not so different from the experience of generations before us
and, I suspect, hardly so alien to what a younger generation will come to live
through. Conditions change, though, economics, the influx of new cultures and
ideas, politics, technology, all these change and inform and influence the
blues players who are learning now, or who will learn. Change is the only
constant, change is inevitable, and those institutions that don't have the
capacity to absorb change and grow as a result will turn into a creaky,
crumbling artifact. The blues is about life as it is lived and felt, present
tense. As long as there are players who feel, cry, laugh hard and feel deeply,
I am fairly sure the tradition of the blues will continue to thrive. It won't
be the same, of course, but the point is that the history of the blues will ask
you this: when was it ever the same?
It was easy to play the cynic when first confronted by the fact of Johnny Winter when he appeared on the national music scene back in in 1968. It was an era where one of the ironic novelties that happened to be a money maker for record companies and concert promoters was white guys playing the blues. Bear in mind that it wasn't all a gimmick, as time has shown that some of the early Caucasians taking up the black man's art form were legitimate contributors to the tradition. Still, it was a gimmick and it still was a money maker, a lure for the larger rock audience, and it was easy, too easy to dismiss Winter as a contrived, the ultimate White Guy Playing the Blues, an albino. This had the makings of an Al Capp caricature. And then there was the witnessing, the revelation.
I saw Johnny Winter at the Detroit Rock and Roll revival at the Michigan State Fair Grounds in Detroit at about 1969, and what he did was transcendent; vicious, slashing slide guitar, fast, fluid , wickedly insinuating slow blues, manically accelerated boogie and shuffles where his swarming notes attacked from all sides and showed a musician who had learned his lessons from the master guitarists he learned from--T Bone Walker, Freddie King, Elmore James--and combined it with the volume and electronics of rock and roll and in doing so made it his own. Winter was singular in his devotion to blues and roots music, he had an aesthetic that basically to serve up music that was raw, honest, unadorned, the basic elements for his guitar work, which was, often times, simply stunning its speed, rawness, the occasional bit of delicacy. And always, its ability to channel emotion, to lift the spirit from the greatest pain, to make you want to dust yourself off and pick up a guitar, a harmonica, to sit behind the drum set and get into the groove. Yes, Johnny Winter could play the guitar, that was all he had to do. Few ever did it so well and I doubt very much few will ever match him as a distinct voice in a genre where duplication of traditional licks is the norm. Johnny, thank you.
Fifty years after the death of Ernest Hemingway, a curious reader still has to hack their way through the thick foliage of bluster, posturing and self parody that remains a strong part of the late Nobel Prize Winner's legacy. I came across Hemingway originally after I discovered Norman Mailer's collection of essays, "The Presidential Papers", and in my growing obsession with Mailer's brilliantly self-declaring sentences I made note of his own obsession with both Hemingway's style and philosophy. In pursuit, I purchased a couple of the author's books and sought what had made Mailer a conflicted partisan of the man's approach to writing; what I found was something else altogether: a crow in a tree with a machine gun.
Man
oh man, what a band. Vanilla Fudge was a band of competent
musicians who came up with one good production, their inspired
production of "You Keep Me Hanging On". It was an inspired move to slow
down the Supremes' most jacked-up hit . Instead of the ringing
-telephone shrillness of the original, this became instead a mock-fugue,
building tension and releasing it effectively erotic explosions.
Sometimes I still thrash around the living room with this song in my
head, miming Vince Martel's clanging power chords with broad sweeps of
my hand. VF's arrangement of this song became the standard approach for
the most part; Rod Stewart did a credible take of his that borrowed
heavily from the Fudge's initial recasting.
Sadly, though, the band
relied too much on that one idea, too often. Their songs, original or
reinterpretations, tended to be dirge like and down right pompous,
dullsville , a drag. And their album "The Beat Goes On" beat Yes to the
punch , producing the single most pretentious and bombastic concept
album years before the British band mustered up that three disc
Hindenburg they titled "Tales from Topographic Ocean." Vanilla Fudge has
a mixed legacy, but the one thing they did well, the storm and thunder
that comprises their version of "You Keep Me Hanging On", they did
brilliantly. It is a thing forever and so few of us accomplish that even
in our most inflated fantasies.
This poem makes me think of coming back late from a party in the late 70's and discovering that the phone has been off the hook for a least half the day. To this day I wonder who might have called, what good news or ill omens they might have had to tell me, what my life might have been like if I left the phone on the hook, had been home to pick up the receiver as the ringing filled the apartment with its clanging sonata of anxiety, if I had only scraped together the coin to buy a Radio Shack answering machine. Those of of us with nerves even the sniffling drivel of bad poets at sparsely attended open readings cannot rattle know the anxiety of the phone off the hook, the screaming, whining, whirling sirens of hell filling an empty room from shag carpet to cob webbed ceiling corner, satanic variations within the monochromatic scale, bristling fingers on a blackboard amplified with Glen Branca's Fender Twin Reverb, a sonic variety of nerve gas that is nothing less than the hungry ID demanding more pie, or that you bake one right now if no slices remain.
This poem is sound intended to kill appetites and interest in community affairs; all one needs are books from which to paraphrase metaphors and contextualize the evidence of one's life until there are only footnotes and marginalia where a pulse used to be. There is the scraping of fingertips across a page of paper irritating to the touch, there is a click, a rattle in one's throat as instinct commands you to say something to void the emptiness, but there is only phlegm, a congealed incoherence suitable for a celebrity wedding. This poem is a compost heap of vowels and their modifiers that was left in back of the garage in the wan hope that they'd be rich with meaning by the time spring air altered the way clouds form on the morning and evening horizons. Often enough we write things down so we would have ad libs and occasional poems to utter when the plumbing groans and the siren rhyme of the cold water streaming to tub and basin obscures the pleasant voice of a lover you remember through the concrete of missing minutes in the day.
This poem is like that noise, a constant string of phrases that are a constant noise textured with static and prickly heat. I would prefer to listen to someone continually busting open the Velcro fly on their old Members Only jacket. I imagine the being someone who would find placing his thumb on an old record turntable to be great fun, a reminder to himself and a warning to the world that entropy trumps ambition, needless ejaculations of fear and panic beat a massage and after dinner sex.
This poem is finally about itself, not who ever he might have been addressing in whatever simulation of a life there is on the other side of his apartment door; we cannot, of course, escape the prison house of language, but there is a point where self reflexivity is merely a dodge, a distraction that we have yet another poet who is tone deaf to the art of collage, cannot construct an ear worthy pastiche, is unwilling to abandon the disguises and borrowed phonics and consider his future as an author of writing with uneven line breaks. This poem is the test pattern staring at you after you come out of a black out. The national anthem has been played and the stadium is empty, like this poem.
Simple grace
would do the trick
if there was anything
simple about grace.
I've tried drinking soft drinks
perched like an ill bird on a limb, but there is
as much spill as thrill
as the horizon teeters
and telephone poles
out number tree tops
of likely places to land.
Walking on glass and hot coals
likewise get me nowhere near the center of things
where all the tension is released from my muscles,
the headaches abate, and my appetite returns.
You asked me once
what made me happy
and i imagined
an empty glass and
calendars stacked in the attic
next to the noise makers and paper slippers.
Your eyes, i said, your eyes
make me happy, the blue and green pools
i fell into when i lifted my head from
books, magazines, airport novels, when i turned my face from
the television
and saw you writing letters,
talking on the phone,
staring out the window
to what might over the hill,
the tree tops, imagining who makes their way home
and pays what's come due
'though the world seems
to dissolve like
sugar wafers dipped
in
Where was the grace we wanted,
walking between bullet streams and falling bricks to the end of the day
where ever after
was a calendar without pages?
On the other side of the street,
a bike chained to a bus stop signed,waiting for its master
for as long as it takes.
HBO's first season sensation "True Detective" is old news by now, but one of the wonders of the internet is that old news items don't simply vanish as they did back in the days of print. Scanning Google for some news on what the second season of TD might contain, I came across Emily Nussbaum's negative review in last March's New Yorker. As the show has had magnanimous praise from critics high, low and middle, her sour take was an oddity, for me at least. I read with interest, and she has some points that needed to be made. Briefly, though, EN overplayed her objections.I was nodding when she making her point, but the objections seemed rather conventional. She objects to dead females and shallow naked females, and I can see her point, but the world these two guys are weighing into isn't a pristine , serene paradise, it's ugly, insane, full of the kind of carnal vice and exploitation she is objecting to. I think she is just being a scold.
And she thinks that Rust's quotable nihiilst philosophizing is trite and premium baloney; I wouldn't argue against that, but this is a television drama, not an ethics lecture, and if Rust's declarations don't hold up under interrogation by professional philosophers, too bad for the philosophers, as that would be a blatant case of missing the point. The point, I submit, is entertainment of a high degree, which True Detective provides.Also, EN is upset that the show is really only about two characters, Rust and Marty, and that it is not an ensemble piece; I submit that good ensemble work requires a more open ended format, a longer season, certainly, and of course, multiple seasons for complexities and interactions of the characters to come to satisfying fruition. This show is a short novel, a James Cain/Hammett/Jim Thompson tale that is terse, sweet, complex in it's compact utility; creator and writer Nic Pizzolato's decision to focus on the the lives of two unlike detectives in the course of their involvement with the case is a smart one; he is getting a good amount of plausible narrative complexity and nuance from the two of them. It's a smart creative decision.
On dirt roads
with good friends
the names come back all at once.
with good friends
the names come back all at once.
with good friends
the names come back all at once.No one I know
who lives without deep sorrow.
No one ever
really finished with desire. The soft animal of my body
does not love
what it has learned. How could it? I wind constantly
the fragile timepiece of another life.No set hour. No luck. No
path
that doesn't eventually
double back. Wanting to live
after your death
is like waking
in an empty room:
too much space. All day I sleep off
the crude hangover. .
I like this poem in theory , as it satisfies my current
interest in poems that have a sparer, even skeletal structure, but Evans could
have done something global here. What it does with the localization of
grief--the stunned incredulity, the trudging past familiar and unfamiliar
things--works well enough, but it seems to stop short. In fact, it stops right
at the point when there's an opportunity for the narrator to make caste some
lines of the world at large, in this time of grief, seeming spectacularly
irrelevant:
Wanting to live after your death is like waking in an empty room: too much space.
There is, to be sure, the suggestion that the narrator
sought a temporary death through an aggrieved drinking binge, that he wanted to
blot out and remove an accumulating mass of emotion that will inevitably
overwhelm him and that this fits in neatly with the previous image, but it is
cheap disservice to an evocative phrase. There is a point where the vocabulary
could have expanded, swelled just a bit, that the metaphors could have gone
beyond the tics and aches of the narrator's hangovers and dulled senses and
demonstrated the external world at large, pieced together by senses that are
deranged with sorrow.
I suspect Evans submitted these poems for publication too
soon. While I like the style of the poem, it seems tentative; where he presents
an interesting springboard to some inspired metaphors, he stops and this, I think,
is the poem's failure. In the two poems you present, he is a bit more talky,
and he edges closer to monologue, to prose, instead of poetry; they remind of
the leaden open pages of Rick Moody's overwrought, hand wringing novel Purple
America, a string of run on misery that irritated me rather than feel sympathy
for the man who must know care for his aging mother.
Evans, I suspect, is still
too close to his material. I am a fan of ambiguity in poems and I rail against
the idea that a poetic narratives , by necessity, be a righteously crafted
thing that is a finished product, self contained, which ties up the loose ends
of a poem tidily the way a situation comedies end with a episode concluding
laugh line. I think Evans is obliged to be honest to his emotional progression
and leave this story unfinished; otherwise it merely becomes another Lifetime
movie of the week. What I didn't like was the convenient, easy, lazy bit about
recovering from a hangover; it does not sound earned. Hence, I wanted more from
this poem; it was building credibly, and then he stopped at the point when I
think he should have pushed further. The poem is premature, I think; he should
have set it aside and come back after some days had passed.
This song is so beautifully tragic and precise in its sense of despair and crushed idealism that I begin to tear up every time I hear it. It was the last song on his previous album, the ironically titled "Greatest Hits." Ochs had taken, late in his career, in dressing up in a gold lame suit and famously told a booing audience in Carnegie Hall that America could only be saved by a revolution and that that wouldn't have happened until Elvis Presley became our Che Guevara. Ochs, who was a deeply romantic in the belief that Great Men with Great Ideas can change the world for the better and who was likewise an alcoholic and a man who was prone to given to depressions that became deeper as he grew older, seemed to be writing a series of melancholic laments that dwelled on the smashing of the idealism that had fueled his songwriting as an anti-war and civil rights activist earlier in the Sixties and the failure of his personal relationships. Ochs did, in fact, take his own life in 1975.
Hello, hello, hello, is there anybody home? I've only called to say, I'm sorry The drums are in the dawn and all the voices gone And it seems that there are no more songs
Once I knew a girl, she was a flower in a flame I loved her as the sea sings sadly Now the ashes of the dream, can be found in the magazines And it seems that there are no more songs
Once I knew a sage, who sang upon the stage He told about the world, his lover A ghost without a name, stands ragged in the rain And it seems that there are no more songs
The rebels they were here, they came beside the door They told me that the moon was bleeding Then all to my surprise, they took away my eyes And it seems that there are no more songs
A star is in the sky, it's time to say goodbye A whale is on the beach, he's dying A white flag in my hand and a white bone in the sand And it seems that there are no more songs
Hello, hello, hello, is there anybody home? I've only called to say, I'm sorry The drums are in the dawn and all the voices gone And it seems that there are no more songs
It seems that there are no more songs It seems that there are no more songs
Strangely, bizarrely, fantastically out of context, I saw Phil Ochs perform this song on a Cleveland dance TV show called "Upbeat," hosted by a local DJ who was desperately trying to comprehend why Ochs, acoustic guitar in hand, was on a teen dance show along with a parade of bubblegum rock and pop-soul bands who performed bad lip-sync renditions of their regional hits songs. The DJ knew enough about Ochs to see that he was a protest singer by trade and mentioned that with recent civil rights legislation and with the Paris Peace talks taking place in an attempt by the US and North Vietnamese Government to end the Vietnam War, the otherwise gutless host said that Ochs might be out of a job unless he sang more upbeat tunes or words to that effect. Ochs just smiled and said he hoped for the best and then performed "No More Songs" live on acoustic. I remember this being one of the few songs that made me haunted me and continued to haunt me for decades. At his best, Phil Ochs was stunningly brilliant as singer and songwriter and especially as a lyricist, a true poet, someone who could easily be the songwriter branch of the Confessional Poets like Robert Lowell and Sylvia Plath, writers of abnormal mental activity that they were compelled to write their demons into verse form in perhaps some effort to extract their awfulness from their souls, a project, it's been suggested, is a species of self-medication, a means to alleviate distress without means to grow stronger and find hope and sunlight. It's been recommended as well that this was a school of writing and a habit of thinking for which early death, either by one's own hand or through the degenerative results of copious alcohol and drug abuse, was how a poet of this description achieves their reputation and legitimacy as a poet. The concept--aesthetic worth judged by the fulfillment of a personal death wish--repulsed me when I was studying 20th-century poets in college, my idea at the time being that one had to insist that art embrace life and affirm its vitality and every sensation this skin we have has us subject to.
I didn't read confessional poets for years but came to a change in my thinking that effectively set aside my previous conceit that poetry, let alone any art, was required to advance anyone's preferences as an arbitrary standard each poet, painter, writer, the dancer had to live up to; the muse to create came from whatever source it came from, it manifested its inspiration in our personalities and our need to express our comforts and misgivings as creatures in this sphere of existence, and it was under no requirement to make our lives better, let alone save our selves from a wicked end or at least the bad habits that can make lives sordid, squalid endurance contests. Everyone is different, everyone has their own story to tell, everyone's fate is their own and no one else's. Most live more or less everyday lives, where ever that is on the continuum of behaviors, no matter how good or bad or how many poems they write. Others are just....doomed, in some respect. Again, I am reminded of Harold Bloom's assertion that literature's only use is to help us think about ourselves in the world, the quality of being nothing more nor less than human, struggling through life with wit and grit, creating and failing and destroying with an array of emotion and words to give them personality.