I regard "Barbary
Shore" as the only total failure among the many brave books Mailer wrote.
In "Advertisements for Myself" he discusses in detail his thinking
about wanting to write something completely different from what made him
famous--would he write "The Naked and the Dead" Go to Paris--and one
can't fault him for wanting a reputation as more than a "war
novelist". There are spots where the writing shines, but at the end of the
day and the last page. the novel is turgid and reads like a better than average
submission to a collegiate short story course. Mailer hadn't yet found a style
that suited him and which would avail him a genuinely flexible style that would
serve him effectively for several decades. The politics and metaphysics haven't
aged well, the sex appeal is awful, the book is a plod. I've read where Mailer
has defended the book , as well he should, but I'm fairly sure he acknowledged
its shortcomings and would admit,
privately, to a confident, that it was a lesson in how to start and finish a
new novel after the rush of creating the first inspired saga has ebbed and what
remains to do be done is actual work.
Barbary Shore has defenders, but
it hasn't the flow or rhythmic mastery of the Mailer writing that came with the
linking narrative of Advertisements for Myself. Shore reads like an over
controlled style, good writing on the face of it but reeking of the exhaustion
one witnesses when they read a young writer trying and to not sound like the
writers that influenced him. Additionally, I think he was too taken with the
convenient metaphor of the boarding house being an existential hell that
harbors various creatures who's nerve has failed them; what is obvious is that
no one leaves the property for good until one of them makes a decision to do something,
follows through on their choice, and then takes full and unapologetic
responsibility for the results and / or consequences. Barbary Shore was a
practice novel of ideas--he would later write some of the most brilliant
fiction of his generation in short order.

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