T.R.Hummer has Three Poems posted today in Slate, which delighted me to no end. This is a trio of swirling rhymes
that will not stand for being mere decorations on that tall, swaying tree
called literary style. Hummer has the musical sway and swing of Edgar Allen
Poe, able to digress, elongate and contract a phrase at will, finding a
tonality of both everyday things and historical memory. This has the snap and
splintery detail of what Tom Waits does with his lyrics, but in this case the
author is more a witness than a persona recalling a location changed by time,
personalities who thrived in the wallow of their eccentricities and who are now
gone, replaced by urban professionals and Lego style architecture.
Hummer's trilogy addresses a set
of conversations where it seems that the sweep of events and the acceleration
of change, complicated by encroaching generations younger and hungrier than
older denizens , all wind up in the dustbin, not swept by rather dumped, or
pushed, as in off a cliff."Imperial" nicely echoes and paraphrases
"Richard Cory" but rather than suicide being the inevitable curse, we
have a personage of fame, wealth, prestige denied the right to be fully human
and full of complexity; he is in a cage, in a sense mummified, locked up in
symbolism, turned into a commodity of hope for a citizenship that he is by
birth obligation inflexibly beholden to.
"Prince Albert in a
can" becomes not a joke but a description of what someone's life has
become. "Pandora Jackson" , In turn, is the story, spread over
generations and variations of Diaspora , of beset upon peoples wandering the map
for new homes, places of security where they may in turn thrive and build
communities; but all are uprooted again,
leaving only the withered ghosts of the means of getting there, railroad
tracks, maintenance equipment, box cars still and void of voices , We are
crowded along until again we are either lifted again by Biblical promise, the
Rapture , or left behind to scrape by in the hallows of the emptied cities and
towns, subsisting until history itself is forgotten.
"Bloodflower Sermon" concerns
the dark fact the homeless millions in our communities, but speaks finally to
the supposition that the light of virtue, the light of truth, leads us not to Heaven but merely rids us of the veils of
self-constructed mythologies we've sustained our daily lives with the clever
rationalizations we've decorated the walls of Plato's Cave and shows us for
what we really are, instinct-driven creatures given a gift of free will with
which we could do great good or worsen the state of things of the planet, The echoes
Delmore Schwartz beautifully, succinctly; Hummer suggests that in the raw state
of nature, bereft of things and self assurances, we find ourselves waiting to
be judged. It is a calculus we dread, a trip no one truly wants to take.

A good piece perceptive writing in your review essay of my friend Terry Hummers 3 poems recently published in Slate.
ReplyDeleteTerry and I have written a musical piece Americamera - he is a fine composer and
instrumentalist- We have collaborated on a concept CD called Americamera-Google AMERICAMERA for a Television show we did for PBS- featuring his work and mine in a musical context - A conversation as Terry and I call it- regarding music lyrics and poetry. You may enjoy it.