Wednesday, January 9, 2008
Tom Sleigh looks for the mourner inside.
Tom Sleigh has an ongoing argument with God which comes to be little than how did He get the job when things in the poet’s life are going so badly? Or not badly enough.There is a strong aroma of dissatisfaction with the materials the poet's higher power has given him to write write about; making do , he resorts to big guns, large concepts each, and smothers the feelings. Sleigh is prone to write some of the saddest poems in his neighborhood, and sad fact accompanying his melancholic verse is that , from evidence presented here in Slate, writes with the sterile seriousness only the most mediocre scribes can manage. “Recording”, as is his style, has the narrator squinting too hard to see how the movements of air carries particles of God’s cloistered whimsy, squinting into dark corners in badly a badly lit room. This is a tragic scenario in which the loss of a dear friend incites the deeper pondering of the bends and dents that make up the mortal coil, but one cannot escape the feeling that even though his friend is the one who is dying, the poem is about something that is happening to the narrator. I imagine a mordant writer trying to enjoy his soup when he gets the call about his friend’s worsened condition, to which he frowns, grimaces, and says under breath damn, more psychic probing to do, damn it all…
The first word God said made everything
out of nothing. But the nothing shows through—
through his breathing on the tape casette,
so slow, so tentatively regular, so almost
at an end although it doesn't end but keeps
refreshing itself over in the quiet it's
recorded in, that it almost seems to float
in like a medium of water, deep down
near the bottom of something too dark
to see through
It might be a natural reaction for some to seek the higher order of things, to ponder the supernatural order behind this fatal happenstance and perhaps prepare a brief against the failing friend’s ignoble end, but Sleigh can’t seem to do anything except write himself into a syntactical muddle. These sentences go on at length and lose their emphasis, which is to say that unsold formless and without the vaguest impact; one may well be able to decipher the substance and themes of Sleigh’s dirge, but that’s merely a victory of critical reading, not a gift to the reader’s soul. Very little in Sleigh’s writerly world is serene , and the sour and souring experiences comprising his subjects are not things that can be, conveyed directly, clearly, with emphasis and impact. Poetry, above all other language arts, is the form which is best suited for the purposeful use of ambiguity, obscurity and a certain amount of cloaking of the terrain one speaks to, but there is a requirement, regardless of what aesthetic or revisionist manifesto that might direct a writer’s hand to at least create a sense of a situation, an emotional imbroglio, a scenario where the distinctions between ideas and forms collapse and language creates terse paradoxes that form the poetics of a severely mixed feelings.
Eliot, whom I assume is a major influence on Sleigh, merged his soul sickness with a richly honed physicality in the form of brilliantly scanned details. They had the effect of making the impossibly vague and indefinite qualities he tried to parlay into language comprehensible to his readers and established the grounds for empathy. One might not have been able to make literal sense from “Ash Wednesday”, but one did garner of sense of its conditions and recognize a human element that transcended Eliot’s vague discontents. What works in Eliot, though, is his ability to leave mention of his own nervous skin and jittery frame of mind and to project his psychological state onto the world his interior life filtered; there is the sense that the inane , the banal and commonplace items that compose the world he knew—breakfast nooks, asylums, cafes, salons , galleries—are transformed into constructs of melancholy, decadence and decline, and yet there remains that it is the experience of the reticent speaker , his drawn-down point of view, that colors and characterizes the environment. His universe was a series of broken dioramas with scenes whose imagery could elicit several generations of critical interpretation that has yet to exhaust Eliot’s text. The author was smart enough not to, in Tom Wolf’s phrase describing Mailer’s fiction “lard things up” with an excess of thinking.
This was the particular miracle in Eliot’s poems that he could exteriorize his feelings and spiritual desolation without analyzing them into inert specimens. Sleigh needs to occupy the states of mind he gives to the page, to declare his ownership of this melancholy and to continue to define the terms of the loss he’s feeling, and it’s this emphasis that makes recording overwrought; hearkening back to an earlier idea that he was irritated by this tragedy at some deep level, he overwrites to the extent that it reads as if he’s attempting to compensate for a lack of first response, and so he plumes the depths of his vocabulary
to construct a suitable model for the depth of his grief. It comes off as strained, convoluted, and unconvincing. Unconvincing for me, at least.
His breathing
is the breath that makes me catch my own breath
coming into my lungs as the sound comes
into my ears and into my brain and into some where
inside me I know is being hollowed out
by each breath of his preparing a nothing
that is so dark and seamless I lose sight
of him being borne away on the currents
of his breathing that inflates into the everything
the nothing wants to be.
When he lay there,
shrinking back away from sunset, the nurse said
his fear was common, called "sundowning."
And when he finally settled down, and later sank
into a coma, he began breathing just this way,
breath flowing out, flowing in, while the nothing
moved on the face of everything and God
climbed down into the rising of it.
This is much ado about the sound and sight of another invading his own senses and how such a case of powerlessness places one in a whispered contact with a concrete yet mysterious inevitability , a real response for anyone who has watched a loved one die, but I particularly resent is Sleigh’s relentless application of the first person “I”, the melodramatic presentation of his internal brooding and symptoms of grief; this is the stuff of the science fiction trope of the android constantly monitoring and analyzing it’s reactions and responses to incidents in order to gauge how close to being genuinely “human” he has become. All through this piece , one is not convinced that the narrator has actually gotten in touch with that well of grief , has gone through the variously stages of coming to terms with a dear loss, and has turned that experience into a strength. Or at least a good poem. “Recording” is an apt and ironic title; moods, flights of dementia, physical reactions are made note of and there is an attempt to duplicate them and reveal the submerged essence of it all in imaginative writing that does not , over all, evoke more than a fictionalized, formula-bound tragedy. It’s an image one finds in a script, with directions for the camera , nicely articulated notes for where the lens should focus , which shoulder to peer over, closing in at just the right speed until we come upon the narrator, sitting alone, holding a cassette recorder; then the music fades and the sounds of the breathing fills the screen. Next , the music raises again as the narrator lifts his head and peers into a corner spot in the ceiling; we hear rain drops. This resembles nothing so much as a dozen closing shots in episodes of “ER”
Sunday, January 6, 2008
Three Larry Coryell Albums
Toku Du is among the "straight ahead" jazz a 1988 set of sessions focusing on jazz standards combining the guitarist with Stanley Cowell (drums), Buster Williams (bass) and Beaver Harris (drums) with results being academic at best. This tunes, Coltrane's "Moment's Notice", Monk's "Round 'Midnight","My Funny Valentine"-- get a neat, circumspect treatment that is gutless at best. The guitarist enters these "straight ahead" projects as if he's doing penance for past sins, or that he's been trying to recover his reputation as a musician since his coke-fueled days in the waning days of fusion. Coryell does better with a later release, My Shining Hour, as he rolls up the sleeves and rags and rages on a material from Miles, Ellington, et al; the playing on the later release is positively liberated and exhilarating, and his band on that session likewise swings and rocks and generally pulses with an verve the present disc in large part lacks. Coryell always bears a listen, but when he chooses to be bad, he chews a foul root. Not that Coryell has forgotten the jazz-rock that made his reputation in the Sixties, as we can see with Cause and Effect, which highlights the guitarist in a Tony Williams Life format with keyboardist Tom Coster and former Journey drummer Steve Smith. Coryell back in his native land, jazz-rock, and the results are prodigious, fleet, searing. Coster and Smith, keyboards and drums respectively, are a galvanized rhythm section switch-hitting time signatures and polyrhythms with a slamming accent, and Coryell is very much at home, very cutting, swift, brilliant. Freed from the archivist's sense of delicacy with older tunes "in the tradition", Coryell follows his wild, sober instincts and lets the notes fly; he hasn't been this exciting in a fusion context since his controversial work with Mingus. Fine and shredding
2008 ? Already?? Ah, man...
We're all nearly a week into the new year, and last night was memorable (but not momentous) because it was the first time in the forthcoming 54 weeks that I wrote "08", and did so without having to cross out an erring "07". The date was on my rent check, due the fifth of the month, and after I signed my name it seemed official, if actually inane; I have committed myself to 2008 as a fact. That being said, one would suppose I'd also say that it's time for folks to stop sussing out, for god's sake, the best and the worst of 2007--c'mon, we're six days into 2008, people , get with the program!! --but before I bid adieu I will suggest that anyone who hasn't seen the film The Assassination of Jessie James By the Coward Robert Ford should so before it slips from theatres. Or at least make your next NetFlix selection. Directed by Andrew Dominik and with a screenplay by him and Ron Hansen (adapted from Hansen's novel), the film features choice performances by Brad Pitt, as James, and Casey Affleck, as the sycophantic Ford. Dominik has a parched, coolly elliptical style that reminds you of Terrence Malick (Badlands, Days of Heaven) as he draws a dry poetic backdrop in this unfolding tragedy. It is about the cult of celebrity worship seen from the 19th century, with James seen as an erratic manic depressive given to exaggerated bouts of joviality and rage in an effort to mask his growing depression; we witness the slow but inevitable course of Robert Ford's infatuation with James turning into paranoia after he joins his gang and moves into his home. Pitt and Delp are amazing polarities here, drawn together for a grim result you'd rather not see coming. This film makes up for the overplayed hype that accompanied the merely OK western 3:10 to Yuma; that film was dressed in old garments that didn't quite fit.
Saturday, January 5, 2008
A fine poem from Kevin Young
Campbell’s Black Bean Soup
Candid, Warhol
scoffed, coined it
a nigger’s loft—
not The Factory,
Basquiat’s studio stood
anything but lofty—
skid rows of canvases,
paint peeling like bananas,
scabs. Bartering work
for horse, Basquiat churned
out butter, signing each
SAMO ©. Sameold. Sambo’s
soup. How to sell out
something bankrupt
already? How to copy
rights? Basquiat stripped
labels, opened & ate
alphabets, chicken
& noodle. Not even brown
broth left beneath, not one
black bean, he smacked
the very bottom, scraping
the uncanny, making
a tin thing sing.
The model, Frank O'Hara, suits Young's ability to catch the manic swerves of accelerated city speech and still have the precise phrasing a poem requires to be memorable. The conflations here, the puns, are electric and potent in the contradictory stances they bring together, a white art world and a young black artist trying to make a place himself amid the shilling, hype and inverse racism and still maintain his cultural identity. Would that he was this much on the beam much more often.
Friday, January 4, 2008
ACT NOW AND SAVE: minimalist misery
There is something to be said about being chintzy with the
number of words one puts on the page as one attempts a compact and powerful
expression of an idea that might otherwise be talked to death. "Less is
more", in the words of architect Mies van der Rohe's explanation for his
Spartan designs. In the builder's sense of the phrase, form follows function,
with the aesthetic of the structure shaped by the functions the building is
required to fulfill; the idea was to disabuse urban populations of the
decorated and sickly festooned traditions of the bourgeoisie that have gone before
and introduce a new set of relationship between human beings and the spaces
they inhabit.
The modernist poet, inclined to the terse and abrupt phrase,
the broken image, the elliptical sensibility, wanted to use words as if they
were objects to be arranged to achieve a specific effect; the aim in turn was
to discard several generations of accumulated rhetoric, not the least being the
argumentative digressions of the Metaphysical Poets and the shammed-up personas
presented by the most drippingly egocentric of the Romantics, and give us all,
rather, a direct treatment of The Image. A reader was to be made aware that
what they were bringing to the poem were associations already contained in their head; the poem, the
hard expression of the perception, stripped of the adjectives and qualifiers
usually the poet's ready, is meant to be seen in itself, isolated. One is
supposed to examine the conditions of their response and realize that it is they, the reader, who completes the poem upon reading. Williams, though,
considered his world rather concretely; there is nothing beyond the mist except
vacuum. Eliot is present, not at all for the obvious reason that Eliot and his
revamping of the Metaphysical Poet’s habit of poeticizing their philosophical
arguments weren’t principal sources of Young’s anxiety of influence. It’s
Williams, with his notion that poetry needs to be in the vernacular and that
the thing in itself is its own adequate symbol, whom Young has gone to school
on and is influenced by. You of all those here should know that not every poet
gathered in this generation of geniuses had the same view as to what poetry and
language must do. It has been said that there are as many types of modernism
as there are modernist’s exceptions, and this ought not be considered a claim that
the poets in America and England were on the same page, reading the same
paragraph, nodding their heads to an agreed agenda. The argument that Young
sides with, and which I find the most appealing, is the one Williams, Shapiro,
MacLeish (and Stevens, for that matter) make in their different ways, especially
in their Imagist experiments, was that what is need in poetry is a clear, hard,
material language where the things of this world can be treated directly. This
was the principle thrust of Modernism, however divided the schools were in
their particular aesthetic--to change the way the world was perceived and, as a
result, change the world for the better.
All this is fine as long as it works, which is to say in
each case that as long as the buildings are reasonably attractive or have
intriguing shapes in the city blocks where they've displaced older buildings,
and as long as the poem is , on its terms, making use of a language, sparse
as it might be, that gives one the phrase, the trope, the image, the spark that
will make the reader's mind engage the cultivated intuition which makes poetry
worth reading (and writing) in the first place.
But too often enough less is less, and this is what poet
Kevin Young has brought us, again, with his poem "Act Now and Save".
Young is one of those young poets whose work veers between genuine invention
and gimmicky application of line breaks and pauses lifted from WC Williams or
Archibald MacLeish; one wonders when he will stop trying to please his
professors and mentors and slip into something more comfortable, such as his voice. His previous poem here, Elegy, was nothing less than a
low-rise building under construction, bare girders and preliminary piping
through which a stiff wind blows. That's the point, I suppose, of a creaky
construction of unmoored signifiers requiring brick, mortar, lumber, wiring,
the placement of windows, so it can finally resemble something useful. It was so
bare that one might as well have been gazing at lone, gnarled steel rods
sprouting from the compact dirt at construction sites as they wait for the rest
of the building to appear, one rivet, welding spot and steel beam at a time.
There are better ways to make the mind do interesting things. Act Now and Save
has the same problem, a sequence pared back so far that there remains only a
gutted root of a poem. It's a sequence of unfinished sentences, declarations
that are choked off before the mind can convince the voice to finish the
sentiment and commit to knowledge that about the speaker's life
has changed. That ambivalence might be interesting had the verbal chunks
themselves, the smashed syntax, been interesting enough to have us imagine,
that is to say, finish the scenario, and alternative scenarios as well.
It's a wonder of the world
keeps its whirling—
How I've waited
without a word—
Staring where
the sun's no longer—
You gone
into ether, wherever
You want
to call it. Soon
Sun won't fight
off the cold
But today warm
even in the rain.
Whatever the well
you want me
To fall down I will—
Meet me by the deepest
part of the river
And we'll drown together
wading out past
All care, beyond even
the shore's hollers.
I can't for a moment find sympathy for this depressed person
who is standing by the river talking to another who is present only in memory;
"river", "drown", "rain" "sun" come off
as readymade words one selects from a write-your-own-free verse-poem list,
terms in themselves that when properly placed give us automatic evocations of
loss and the feeling that world is too complex and mean spirited to continue to
live in now that a certain someone is gone. Not that there is anything wrong
with these words as such, just as there is nothing wrong with the notes one
hears in a glutted guitar solo on a classic rock station. Context is
everything, a suitable melody for the guitar notes, and sharply drawn
particulars, details, in the case of Young's poem. It sounds hackneyed to say
this, but Young didn't make me care about this mumbling; one hears this stuff
on public transportation all the time, but the beleaguered there are not paid
four hundred dollars by Slate. Young at his worst sounds like he’s still trying
to prove himself to his elders . The essential point didn’t require a thorough outlay of the trends in modernist
poetry since the Jazz Age, since that would have been padding. I spoke to those
facets of modernism that are the models Young sees himself in line with. The
limits of empathy are tested and exhausted every day until the next morning,
and a professional like Young should give us more than this dress rehearsal.
It's opening night here, and his fly is open.
Thursday, January 3, 2008
Exile on Main Street
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